Blog reflection 3

1. After carefully reading your peer review what changes or additions could you make to improve your film? (Discuss sound, titles, story and genre specific elements)
A change i could make that would make the story of my film more clear is adding some sub titles to explain the movie and make it more clear to the watcher. I could use images that are edited in photo shop to help explain the story more clearly. I should use more elements that create a drama to help as well.

2. Make a list of sound effects that you will need for your film.
-footsteps for the beginning
- a song for the background
- maybe a few different sound effects to create the dramatic effect
- sad music at start and happy music at end

3. Do you feel that your film tells a story clearly or that a strong message is conveyed? If not how can you make this more effective?
I don't feel as though my film tells the story clearly as Tamika on my peer editing sheet said i need to make the story more clear. I could do this by putting sub titles in so people would be able to read and understand the story.

4. What is the story?
The story is about a girl who lives her life backwards, ever since she was born she has lived backwards. Everything she does is backwards, one day she decides to make a change in her life and finally go forward.

5. Do you clearly introduce the genre and the characters at the start of the film?
Yes, the genre and characters are portrayed clearly at the start of the film.

6. What is the climax or how did you achieve a climax in the story?
The climax is when she decides to change her whole way of living life and start to live a different way. This is wear she types something on the computer and then it fades into her being happy in the film and going forward.

7. How is the climax or major event resolved?
It is resolved in the way she finally realise's that she can change her own life and she doesn't have to wait for some one to do it for her.

8. Have you included credits in your film?
No i have no included credits in my film as i am not actually at the end yet, when i finish my film, there will be credit to the director, Grace and the actor Tamika.